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For many students a Task1 essay about maps can be very challenging. Where should you begin? How can you organize your points logically? The following sample essay can be helpful in getting a decent score

Remember to start your essay with a description of what you see. This is your first paragraph. Often one paragraph is sufficient.                              The diagrams show Queen Mary Hospital at three different stages in its development: 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The diagram contains 3 different floor plans for each of the 3 time periods for the hospital. Describe the details of these separately. Notice that all of the verbs are in the past tense.

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In 1960, the hospital was build close to a main road and next to a shopping centre. A large area behind the hospital was turned into a car park, while the area behind the shopping centre was farmland.

By 1980, the shopping centre had been demolished in order to make way for two additional hospital building which became a pharmacy and a cancer centre. Furthermore, the hospital gained the farmland and converted it into a nursing school.

In 2000, the main hospital building remained unchanged but the cancer centre was extended to cover the entire nursing school. As a result of this, the original car park was divided into two so that it provided a smaller car park and a small nursing school.

This final paragraph compares all 3 of the time periods by mentioning the major changes

During this period, the hospital has increased in size and, in addition to a new nursing school, a cancer centre has been created and extended. Hence the capacity of the car park has been reduced by a half.

 

(178 words) Remember your target is to write 150 words in 20 minutes

 

 

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